Open Poetry #40 |
Northwas A Lullaby |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Northwas A Lullaby somewhere in the distance plays a lullaby’s song and if you find it soothing for you I will sing along it is a calming melody to make the world disappear listen to my voice I am here rest your weary head upon me you can sleep tell me of your troubles every secret I will keep the wind stirs outside in darkness northwas a silver storm so curl your skin around me here you are safe and warm “but I'm so hard to handle |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
you wrote a very beautiful love poem. a real love poem. It warms my heart. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Listen? What is your schedule like next week? I am in a state of "overwhelm" and could sure use a place to fall. Beautiful Helen. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
drauntz ...thanks and sharon... you are always welcome with me just curl yourself around |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"northwas a silver storm so curl your skin around me here you are safe and warm" the title alone is a poem Helen |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Soothing love, beautifully expressed. Love, Margherita |
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TC Junior Member
since 2007-05-01
Posts 15Scotland |
a lady you certainly are, and as a poet really slick. I loved this, made me feel all mushey inside. TC Jim |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
listen to my voice I am here rest your weary head upon me you can sleep tell me of your troubles every secret I will keep This is so very lovely!!! Anyone being offered such a melody is very lucky indeed. *S* Beautiful work! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Oh, Helen! This is so pretty it makes me want to put music behind it...hmmm, maybe there already is music behind it. ...jo |
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