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Feeling You Here, From There
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Feeling You Here, From There |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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I hate the way that you can make me feel you here, from there where you are thousands of miles away still touching my heart causing this ache making me miss you even more. I've seen the paintings in the air |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beautifully bittersweet... sad, and lonely is the feeling from this... its raining here to, but soon the sun will shine once more... Hugs to you |
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Jenna Member
since 2007-03-20
Posts 180 |
beautiful..could feel your pain in this |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
I can relate to this so much Hope |
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Meggen Junior Member
since 2007-04-26
Posts 15St. Paul, Mn |
nice. Megg. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very sweet, Donna...  M |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Man I know this feeling...James |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I don't even have to tell you how this one makes me feel gentle Donna  hardhitting... |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
To me, this 'write' is another most finely emotive example of what I term "slice-of-everperson's life" dejavu. In particular, it makes me think of two grand 'lost loves' (a certain lass and her native Scotland!) Applause! |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
You touched me - and that's what it's all about. Wanna hokey-pokey with me? Kidding. This is lovely and touching - and I feel it. A |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you would think that no one person could possess such power, but dang it if they aren't just overflowing with it! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
beautiful my friend. j. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
beautiful my friend. j. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
You've cut through all the superfluous words and nailed it with this, Donna. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
As long as there is room in your heart this presence will be felt. Sharp and true! If it still hurts, open a little window in your heart and say “fly away, I give you back your freedom”. May it work! Still, sometimes this ache has a sweet touch left. Love, Margherita |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
May Spring dawn in your heart and like a slow-motion fountain, fan out and spray the hurt far away, and may it be replaced it with healing, peace and happiness. Lovely poem from a lovely lady. Thank you. - Owl |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Donna, you reflect the embodied spirit of many a 'star crossed lover'. Yet... for my soul... If it were but all that I could have, even still, I would have it so. Though the distant be great, I would cherish the feeling that binds and love all the more. Peace be unto you, MoonShadow. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Miles aren't an impediment to love... neither do they ease the pain of losing love. Superb write!!! *S* |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
1derful write  Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you each so much, it is appreciated. Moonshadow...you and I both, yes agreed.... Thank you kind sir...I've seen the paintings in the air |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
hugssss....a beautiful write Donna... ~~**~~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
 sis, it is so good to see your smile again. Don't stay away so long next time, ya hear???  (((HUGSSSSSSSSSSSSS)) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dear Donna, your spirit is indeed, gentle ~ and it feels so deeply ~ and you convey those feelings so poetically. You write what you feel ~ and I feel what you write. Loveya! Linda |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Linda I am so glad that you can understand what I write and am so appreciative of being able to express myself here through words...lest I go nuts not writing... Thanks so much sweetie. HUGSI've seen the paintings in the air |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Donna, you have a way of putting feelings into words so effortlessly. *hugs*....jo |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Hugs Jo. It' so good to see you again. And hey, I just write what I feel. Sometimes I worry about the technical aspects of writing and other times I just write what pushes itself out. This was one of those times. Thanks sweetie, have missed you!! |
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