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Open Poetry #40

A child's hug..

MindBodySoul
Member

since 2007-01-10

Posts 196
NJ

0 posted 2007-05-04 02:28 PM

My daughter
this morning
in her half asleep state
and as her sister still slept
Put her little arms
around my waist
rested her head
against my breast
looked up at me
and said ....
"I Love You Mommy"

Her big brown eyes
with adoration
her face innocent
of all sins
smiled up at me
yearning for my
tight hug
a kiss on her forehead
when I responded
"I love you too Baby"

My little angel
made a difference
with that one hug
Can you imagine
that kind of love
shared throughout the world
what a difference it would make!

Jen--->MindBodySoul

[This message has been edited by MindBodySoul (05-04-2007 03:29 PM).]

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

1 posted 2007-05-04 03:40 PM

I can imagine... and wish. *S* Beautiful work... thanks for sharing that tender blessing with us! *S*

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

2 posted 2007-05-04 09:53 PM

Agree with the concept and thoroughly enjoyed the write, but don't believe man's made for love on that scale...to individualistic and possesive. And yet, man-kind is plump with bits and pieces of it as described with your daughter...

j.

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

3 posted 2007-05-04 10:27 PM

understand the feeling. see how life is wonderful?! Children bring heaven to us.
their understanding, their forgiveness, their unconditional love, and their unconditional depending on us, all soften our hearts.

wonderful poem and beautiful picture.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2007-05-04 10:32 PM

That would be a grand miracle! Enjoyed this and the beautiful picture, too.

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