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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2007-05-01 08:08 PM



Savoring Her Papayas


Offering to
buy them,
she said that
they were free.
With her generousity
she could go far
with a man like me,
savoring the sweet
taste of her papayas
under the papaya tree.


JamesLee
01May
2007






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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2007-05-01 08:19 PM


Ah, alluring sweet papaya nectar has captured another incurable romantic!
aziza
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2 posted 2007-05-01 08:21 PM


The smile on my face is a by-product of this poem.

Thank you.

A

Huan Yi
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3 posted 2007-05-01 08:49 PM




Good
Glad you could get away with it

John

Drauntz
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4 posted 2007-05-01 09:04 PM


free?...might make you addict to it.

nice poem.

[This message has been edited by Drauntz (05-02-2007 01:04 AM).]

The Lady
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5 posted 2007-05-02 12:39 PM




oh...

her papayas is it James?

does she have guavas too?

aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
6 posted 2007-05-04 11:27 AM


I am not ready for this one to disappear on the next page.

I am still in love with it.

A

secondhanddreampoet
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7 posted 2007-05-04 11:33 AM


v. fine!

Applause!!

jwesley
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8 posted 2007-05-04 10:00 PM


loved it James!!!

j.

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