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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Dandelion Spaces I call your name to the same dandelion spaces Where there, I found your sparkling heart Dotting field in yellow bliss turns tender to the sun Though now, returns of an opaque silence Deafening echoes of hollow drum retort in crimson veil Lifting from a husk, to carry my thoughts higher In disbelief I stare, remembering each stage hope fills So suddenly to blossom beneath the tears of God It’s then I know this empty place impervious to time Where life was lent to me, as joy and sorrow Copyright Kkh 5/2/07 |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
“So suddenly to blossom beneath the tears of God It’s then I know this empty place impervious to time Where life was lent to me, as joy and sorrow” Life is for the taking and giving, sharing thought and emotion. And you are a blessed soul expressing your God given talent. This verse alone speaks volumes of your understanding and passion for life. Beautifully expressed. JL  Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
... and here my tears flow and mix with God's and yours for the utter beauty of your words, almost unbearable for what they convey. Immensely poignant, dear (((((Kathleen)))). In writing, your heart finds a way to cope. Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 beautiful you |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Kathleen, Your pen cries tears of a love gone too soon. I am so very sorry for your loss. Hearthugs sweet lady.  . |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
exquisite!.... "It’s then I know this empty place impervious to time Where life was lent to me, as joy and sorrow" [assuredly, my thoughts are with you at this time!] |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
With beautiful words and talent you share your pain with us...I join my tears with yours as I feel the deep beauty of the love you gave and the understanding you have...Magnificent writing dear Kathleen...*Big Hugs* |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Dandelion yellow comforts the eyee, as the heart knows the true essence and value of its presence. Sending you peaceful thoughts on the soon-to-be feathery orbs of winged dandelion dancers. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
wonderfully expressed in this beautifully passionate write. Lovely Lady!!!!!! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
It’s then I know this empty place impervious to time Where life was lent to me, as joy and sorrow So very beautiful... so very heartbreaking!! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I call your name to the same dandelion spaces Where there, I found your sparkling heart Dotting field in yellow bliss turns tender to the sun beautiful, tender writing, Kathleen M |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Where life was lent to me, as joy and sorrow" yes... exquisite is the word |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Kathleen, you write of your pain so beautifully. Here is a great big for you. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Kathleen, even in your time of sorrow you write equisitely. I'm tucking this away as it is one of the most amazing pieces I have ever read. ...jo |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dear TD "It’s then I know this empty place impervious to time Where life was lent to me, as joy and sorrow" I have no words. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kathleen~ Having read this earlier ... I just couldn't find the words ... upon looking out across the back lawn this morning ... I see those Dandelion faces ... and they made me think of you and of your tremendous loss~ Just sending a 'thought-bouquet' of those Dandelions to you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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