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Loves Touch (rictameter inspired by Moonshadow)
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Loves Touch (rictameter inspired by Moonshadow) |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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~ Loves Touch ~ Loves touch lingers behind unseen, though yet, remains immortalized in memory. If this were all that I could ever have even still, with each breath then drawn I'd rather it be so than to not know loves touch. {thank you, for the inspiration, Sir Moonshadow...} I've seen the paintings in the air brushed by the hand of God~ Lonestar |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
This 'rictameter' is excellent! MUCH applause!! |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
This is beautiful! A |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
glad you got inspired!  |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Absolutely Beautiful...A magnificent poem that fills the vision with beauty and acceptance...*Big Hugs* |
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paullallady Member
since 2007-04-03
Posts 262Michigan |
This is a wonderful poem. To know loves touch, even if that is all we know, it is enough. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"than to not know loves touch." such a sad thought gentle Donna and such an exquisite work... hugs... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh....I know someone who needs to see this...  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you all for the sweet and kind replies.  Peace.... |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Beautifully said, G.S. with wonderful style. MoonShadow . |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Me, too, Donna, me too. Most wonderfully said! *hugs*...jo |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I'm so happy for the incredible inspiration which led you to this marvelous write....simply wonderful writing... enjoyed.... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Immaculate! I love it! 1derful! Write on! How will you ever top this? Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is beautifully written. I wish I could say the same, but I'm not so sure I would want to feel "Love's Touch", again. |
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