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Open Poetry #40

Morose and Despondent

The_Nameless_One
Member

since 2007-01-20

Posts 165
Missouri

0 posted 2007-05-06 02:47 PM

The hoar frost enwraps my soul
A solid Arctic hold

Numbing all emotion
Feelings getting dulled

Wishing for an ember glow
To ignite the blaze

Just a little spark of fire
Will burn away the haze

This will never happen though
I am too morose

Every day I walk around
My despondency grows

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

1 posted 2007-05-06 10:06 PM

just as your topic, so well writen.

sad, very sad. but still one needs to struggle to find the spark....the hope.

enjoyed.

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

2 posted 2007-05-09 12:33 PM

A powerful image:

"The hoar frost enwraps my soul
A solid Arctic hold..."

interesting 'write'!

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

3 posted 2007-05-09 02:29 PM

I understand your feelings, very well.

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