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Losing Control
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Losing Control |
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The_Nameless_One Member
since 2007-01-20
Posts 165Missouri |
Catastrophic rage Berserker inside of me Ready to release |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I kind of wanted to duck as I read. You described losing control so well -- it's a feeling that I really hate. Good write. Alison [This message has been edited by aziza (05-07-2007 11:46 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yep, that's just how it feels well done! |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
WOW!!!...I could sure feel the anger in your words...Powerfully said...*Big Hugs* |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Quite powerful indeed, this senryu! Advise is delivered! Very good. Love, Margherita |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
profound and so true, we've all been there, and have learned what this feared emotion brings us |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
powerful write love that word... berserker! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Thanks for the warning! lol Gosh, you certainly expressed those pent-up emotions, very well! Hold your breath and count to ten! It works for me! ~ Well, at least most of the time!   EA |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
The way we all likely come to feel at times! [a "slice of 'everyperson' life-dejavu" 'write'] Applause! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Your anger is easy to see. |
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