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Paper Moon |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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You must have read my mind each night I sat up and cried You must have followed the bread crumbs I left behind as I meandered lost coddling my broken heart I was certain that I was making wishes on empty stars The pain seemed impossible to shake until You read my broken soul's personal ad My soul was plastered upon the paper moon desperately seeking a response You must have heard me cry out your name as I waited for you upon the paper moon... [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (05-03-2007 11:47 PM).] |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
almost followed the sadness to cry. the longing, too much to bear. beautiful. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
FINE Romanticism!... [effectively emotive!] Applause! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I was certain that I was making wishes on empty stars I like this very much! *S* |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
liked all of this... j. |
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