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Parts of My Soul
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Parts of My Soul |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Soul parts drifted into words. Expressive dreams of an illogical mind swept into a pile of sentences which inadequately mirrored and reflected matters of the heart. Logic was lost in a mist of emotional meltdown. aziza |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Powerful expression. Even only parts of the soul can bring a transparency unknown to the logical mind. Beautiful! Love, Margherita |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Thank you for the beautiful thoughts you shared too. Alison |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
If the parts of your soul/his soul/both of your souls are this beautiful, perhaps it is good that we aren't exposed to the whole soul (or, even more, both souls!) - we might be blinded - even through the mist! - Owl |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Expressive dreams of an illogical mind swept into a pile of sentences" you say it so well Alison it grabs me |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Logic was lost in a mist of emotional meltdown." ~ Which is, unfortunately, so often the case. A little poem with lots of emotion! Well done! Loving hug, EA |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well writ  Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
beautiful! "Logic was lost in a mist of emotional meltdown." why we need it annway! enjoyed |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I shouldn't laugh (smile)at this: "Logic was lost in a mist of emotional meltdown." but I am in the middle of one...  M |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Owl You are such a beautiful person and you bring that beauty to every poem of mine that you respond to. Thank you for the gift of your thoughts and words. Alison --- Darlin' Lady Your writing often leaves me speechless as it so beautiful and moves me so deeply. Thank you for responding to my poem. A --- EA Emotion spills out of me, but I am totally inept in the logic area. Thank you for reading and responding. xoxoxo A --- Interloper Thank you for dropping in and reading. I look for your work and always smile when I see you have read one of my pieces. A --- Drauntz Thank you for reading, commenting and enjoying. --- M I just am always happy to see you responding. I admire your thoughts a lot. A |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What an exquisite expression of something many of us have known intimately at one time or another! *S* Beautiful work! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
YES! Wonderful write! Even has me sitting here, paused in my typing, thinking about it... again...yes! j. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
suthern and jwesley Thank you both. I admire both of your writing and you made me smile as I read your comments to this poem. I am honored to be writing and posting with you and the others in PiP. |
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