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Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

0 posted 2007-04-30 05:07 PM

I dreamed bright love a calling came
across the desert seas of flame
he heard my heart, he called my name
and I will go with him.

He touched my lips and they were sealed
against the pain that love might yield
he took me from this barren field
and I will go with him.

He led me to the place of rest
where dreams don’t fade and I am blessed
he clothed me in his joy and dressed
me full in love for him.

He took my tears and wiped away
the stain of living everyday
he taught me how to laugh and pray
and I will dwell with him.

a good commitee can decimate communication.

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

1 posted 2007-04-30 05:29 PM

what a beautiful love poem. make me warm.

enjoyed happily

andrey
Junior Member

since 2007-04-27

Posts 29

2 posted 2007-04-30 05:30 PM

very beautiful!

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

3 posted 2007-04-30 06:27 PM

If this is the 23rd love song, I'd sure like to hear the other 22! There are so many neat lines; especially liked this:

"he clothed me in his joy and dressed
me full in love for him."

Beautiful poem!

miscellanea

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2007-05-01 03:17 AM

And well you do to dwell with him.

So beautiful!

Love,
Margherita

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

5 posted 2007-05-01 04:06 AM

Beautiful.What a dream. martyjo

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2007-05-01 07:41 AM

Kethry~

Beautifully sung~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

7 posted 2007-05-01 10:55 AM

This is absolutely lovely, my friend... It leaves a sense of reverence and awe... and peace worthy of the finest psalm. *S*

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

8 posted 2007-05-01 11:16 AM

"He took my tears and wiped away
the stain of living everyday
he taught me how to laugh and pray
and I will dwell with him."

~ Sounds like a man worthy of dwelling with!

Your poem made my heart skip merrily along! Thank you for the joyful experience!

Linda

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

9 posted 2007-05-01 11:22 AM

so much enjoyed the meter...and the last line of each and every paragraph, as if to say...stop and think about each and every sentence above....almost like viewing hindsight upclose and personal...who possesses God in image...

marvelous write...

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

10 posted 2007-05-02 12:49 PM

So very lovely...makes me yearn

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

11 posted 2007-05-02 05:52 PM

the stain of living everyday...for some reason this is my favorite line...

M

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