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Midnitesun

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Gaia

0 posted 2007-04-29 08:55 AM

Could there be a better way
to begin a new day?

Imagine yourself sliding
into a slip of divine time,
captured within serendipitous rhyme,
bathing in sweet soft shafts of sunlight,
wakening from some deep-time sleep
hearing soft cascading coos
from a nearby mourning dove;
stretching nakedly serene
alongside the one you love.

Could there be a better way
to begin a new day?

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

1 posted 2007-04-29 09:03 AM

Ah...if there is I don't want to find it any time soon my friend...because even if it's 'better', it certainly will not be the 'best'!

j.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2007-04-29 09:09 AM

ok so the last part is how i just woke up

there is no better way, at least not for me! enjoyed this very much...good morning!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

3 posted 2007-04-29 09:13 AM

welp...I don't think there is

love to read you Kacy

Midnitesun

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Gaia

4 posted 2007-04-29 09:13 AM

Jimmy, Susan, Dixie... thank you for sharing your soft smiles this morning!

Jaime Fradera
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since 2000-11-25

Posts 843
Where no tyranny is tolerable

5 posted 2007-04-29 08:01 PM

That is mostly a fantasy for me right now,
but I will take your word for it.
Thought for the moment
I must eat what I am served ...

Holding Midnitesun in my dreams.

Hey Kacy, do you still have Live Messenger?
I only know how to talk with "Katrina."
Are there best days or times to reach you?

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

6 posted 2007-04-30 04:04 AM

beautiful poem. very romantic.

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

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a 'Universalist' !

7 posted 2007-04-30 06:17 AM

I particularly love:

".....a slip of divine time,
captured within serendipitous rhyme,
bathing in sweet soft shafts of sunlight..."

Applause!

[This message has been edited by secondhanddreampoet (04-30-2007 12:36 PM).]

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

8 posted 2007-04-30 09:51 AM

Ahhh ... so serene!

Especially if one does not need to get up immediately!

Love and Joy.

Margherita

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

9 posted 2007-04-30 11:47 AM

I don't think so! I can hear the mourning dove's coos sooooooo clearly. All beautiful.

- Owl

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2007-05-01 08:14 PM

Nice...James

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26

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The Southwest

11 posted 2007-05-02 12:41 PM

ahhhh yes Kacy
I can imagine that

and I can't imagine a better way

love this

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

12 posted 2007-05-02 09:58 AM

I knew there HAD to be a better way than shrill alarm clocks.... If this could be mine, I'd sure become a morning person in a hurry! *S*

Robert Jordan
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since 2007-02-07

Posts 392
Philadelphia Pa USA

13 posted 2007-05-03 09:27 PM

Midnitesun,

This is particularly well written. I can’t find anything to complain about.

This name "Kacy" rings a bell with me. As I'm an old man, I forget where I met it before.

Bobby

[This message has been edited by Robert Jordan (05-03-2007 10:14 PM).]

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

14 posted 2007-05-04 12:51 PM

Sure sounds good to me, Kacy! So good to read you!

....jo

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29

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South Africa

15 posted 2007-05-04 08:09 AM

No, Kacy, I can't think of a better way. Well said!

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

16 posted 2007-05-04 08:31 AM

Imagine yourself sliding
into a slip of divine time,
captured within serendipitous rhyme,

oh yes, Kacy, you dream well...
take me with you

absolute beauty

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

17 posted 2007-05-04 10:29 AM

Kacy..to feel the wealth that wrote this poem..no, I think there's not a better way.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

18 posted 2007-05-05 07:38 PM

From the depths of my heart, I thank you each for taking time to read and comment. ALWAYS, you make my moments here truly meaningful.

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