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paullallady
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since 2007-04-03
Posts 262
Michigan

0 posted 2007-05-03 12:02 PM



LET GO

slip away
close your eyes
hide your heart
from all the lies

feel the tears
hear the cries
then let go
and give a sigh

now give way
while tears dry
let wounds heal
and say goodbye

© Copyright 2007 Paulette - All Rights Reserved
Drauntz
Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
1 posted 2007-05-03 12:24 PM


wow. determined!! a very strong voice.

enjoyed.

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2007-05-03 12:52 PM


a great inspiration to those who are hurting or going thru any hard time...very wise and stable advice.

Well done!!!!!!  applauding!!!!

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
3 posted 2007-05-03 08:51 PM



good work Paulette
I enjoyed it...

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
4 posted 2007-05-06 12:10 PM


Paulette,
this is very wise and well said. In letting go, we can move on.

Highly significant!

Love,
Margherita

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