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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Rosy mist of summer shell Erotic scent of Jezebel Taunting, teasing sultry sway Weaving web of shimmered haze Wrapping, wafting with the breeze Tantalizing tempting, dancing tease Rosy mist of summer shell Erotic scent of Jezebel Sultry, sensuous illicit dreams Flying, floating to sights unseen Laughing, lusty dulcet strains Inviting arms reach once again Rosy mist of summer shell Silken strands of Jezebel Silver song beckons invitation Flitting form promises sultry sensation Until the day breaks with the dawn In the sigh of darkness, Jezebel is gone Rosy mist of summer shell Fleeting memories of Jezebel -- aziza |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
It's been too long awhile since you treated your pip friends with your fine poetry! Alluring, mystical, and captivating! When I was a teenager, our church held a Hallowe'en party for the 'young people'. We were to dress in biblical costumes. Can you guess who I went as?!? lol ~ I wasn't always the little 'angel' that I am nowadays!  Enjoyed your poem ~ and thanks for the memories! Good to see you posting again! You're one of my favs! Lovin' hug, EA |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
couldn't have said it better then Linda sensually delicious |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
oh Alison what a delight! |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
What a wonderful thing to come here tonight and see that three I admire so much on these boards responded with such friendship and kindness. You all made my night and I thank you for the wonderful welcome back. There's been a quiet lull lately lving in my head and heart -- but I am always going to return. Thank you again, EA, Lee and Lovely lady Alison |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
oooo zi! I love this, it is absolutely gorgeous  *hugs tight* Sheli |
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dwgpoet Member
since 2007-03-05
Posts 122FL, USA |
Musically spellbinding. I usually think,too many adjectives show danger to Nouns. However, your noun: "Jezebel" subjects herself to multitudes. Loved the sound: (Taunting, teasing)(Weaving web)(Wrapping, wafting with)(Tantalizing tempting, dancing tease)(summer shell ... scent ... Sultry, sensuous illicit)(Flying, floating)(Laughing, lusty dulce)(summer shell Silken strands of Jezebel) Thank You, Alison. copyright dwgpoet 2007 |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England |
Alison, ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Erotic scent of Jezebel Rosy mist of summer shell Laughing, lusty dulcet strains Flying, floating to sights unseen Wrapping, wafting with the breeze Tantalizing tempting, dancing tease Silken strands of Jezebel Weaving web of shimmered haze Taunting, teasing sultry sway Sultry, sensuous illicit dreams Laughing, lusty dulcet strains Inviting arms reach once again Fleeting memories of Jezebel Rosy mist of summer shell Silver song beckons invitation Flitting form promises sultry sensation Until the day breaks with the dawn In the sigh of darkness, Jezebel is gone ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ However you look at it, this is good sensuous poetry, leaving one wishing the sun wouldn't rise.... Ivor |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Thank you all for the comments. Ivor, great edit job there. I appreciate you a lot. Sheli, love you, girly girl. xoxoxo A |
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Robert Jordan Member
since 2007-02-07
Posts 392Philadelphia Pa USA |
Aziza, This is good writing. Ivor beat me to the punch with his post. Bobby |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Bobby, Thank you. I am enjoying reading your words. Alison |
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