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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
At down The moon With a golden crown She, On a white horse Trotting on the blue lawn In the fading mist He In a red canoe Gliding along the cascade of greens On a silver sheet He enchants her view She fancies his dream [This message has been edited by Drauntz (04-27-2007 04:42 PM).] |
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MindBodySoul Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 196NJ |
Drauntz~~~ You are such a romantic! I could visualize love at first sight... an attraction without words... emotions that are felt, no need to speak of them... So beaustiful!!! thanks for sharing! Jen--->MindBodySoul |
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paullallady Member
since 2007-04-03
Posts 262Michigan |
amazingly descriptive, and very romantic. I loved this. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Drauntz,Loved this. You are a very interesting writer.I always click open when I see your name.Just do not have time to post to all I read. Thank you for all your contributions. martyjo |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This is truly lovely |
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