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Open Poetry #40

County Road

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2007-04-26 07:35 PM

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A thick Spring fog
Sits on the roofs
Of the neighborhood

A church spire barely visible
Hangs suspended in the air

Somehow I think you’re there
Without any reason why

You look back at me
As I stand by the window pane

And not feeling quite alone
As I was before
I smile

.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2007-04-26 07:54 PM

very sweet, John

M

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

2 posted 2007-04-26 10:23 PM

I am very happy for "I". sHe deserves.

latearrival
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since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

3 posted 2007-04-27 04:24 AM

.....and I heard a small voice whisper, I am here. enjoyed, martyjo

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2007-04-27 06:28 AM

its a very nice smile....for both...

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2007-04-27 10:05 AM

A gem of a little poem. With an economy of words you adeptly created the scene, the mood, and elicited a warm emotional response from this reader.

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

6 posted 2007-04-27 11:37 PM

wonderful 'write', Sir Poet!
[grand imagery;  powerfully
  emotive via its refined
   simplicity]

MUCH applause!

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

7 posted 2007-04-27 11:41 PM

Thank you all

It's what happens sometimes
when you look out a window

Thanks again

John

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