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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. At least I’ve learned To limit the level of conversation Unless I want that blank Zen look From now so obvious a master I suppose it is a way of staying young There being nothing suggesting Any advancement in the years Yet of course there is the hair However unnatural in its dye And should I in bed Put my head next to hers I’m sure to hear the sea . |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
Sir, you forgot "under the Autumn moon of Madagascar". |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
 Oh my goodness. Vicious, but funny.Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
Nan, It is funny. YOu know that he writes great poems and he is a very serious poet. One may not understand all his writings but one may feel the feelings and emotions which is enough plus the smoothness, and always a beauty to appreciate. If I have made some silly comments in the reply of his poems it is purely for entertaining him because the trouble I made in PM. I wish him happy with all my heart. and I value every beautiful souls. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
most interesting 'write'..... You really are very good, John! |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. SHDP Thanks Sometimes it really doesn’t hurt to show the cat still has claws . . . Thanks all John . |
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