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Open Poetry #40

windows and planes

Meggen
Junior Member

since 2007-04-26

Posts 15
St. Paul, Mn

0 posted 2007-04-27 01:42 PM

A pixilated flash of smoke
Travels across the bluest
And flies buzz their green.

Witches under the noose,
With brown unfaltering eyes.

Streams gather through all
Cracks in the earth.
They collide into one

And I’m driving with you,
My feet are up and there is
Flatness all around with
A plane streaking across the sky.

My eyes like to dilate.

Megg.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2007-04-27 01:55 PM

whewwww, very descriptive, you paint visuals so so profoundly

paullallady
Member

since 2007-04-03

Posts 262
Michigan

2 posted 2007-04-27 03:49 PM

very descriptive piece, a true poetic artist.

Rottiestyl
Member

since 2007-04-19

Posts 60
Illinois, USA

3 posted 2007-04-27 05:56 PM

Abstract and perfect.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

4 posted 2007-04-27 11:01 PM

Well now...not SURE I understood...but loved the way it read...

jwesley

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