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Open Poetry #40

Past is

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

0 posted 2007-04-26 03:55 PM

icebox inspired this with his "Whispering at Vespers". I hope he doesn't mind that this inferior work cites his poem.
Past Is

Past is a place we never were,
future a place we may never see,
and now balances
on the cusp of fate.

And love sometimes comes
too late.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

1 posted 2007-04-26 04:06 PM

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I think it's pretty good.

John

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Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

2 posted 2007-04-26 04:18 PM

Thanks, John.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

3 posted 2007-04-26 06:47 PM

~~and I agree

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

4 posted 2007-04-26 07:11 PM

you are right.
why
"And love sometimes comes
too late."? one may not realize in early life.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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5 posted 2007-04-27 11:30 AM

"future a place we may never see,"

~ Sad, but true.

"and now balances
on the cusp of fate."

~ Truly profound.

"And love sometimes comes
too late."

~ Better late than never!