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Poet's Eulogy |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Poet’s Eulogy When this ‘poetic heart’ be still, bury me by starlight on some distant hill, in silent-forest eulogy where my unanchored soul may dance, with galaxies drifting in and out of Time; and, my gentle voice forever whisper, (with forgiveness for all Life’s transgressions) of love’s eternal magic and Nature’s infinite truth! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
your "poetic heart" shall never be still it will beat in all the words you leave behind and these words are truly lovely... |
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Robert Jordan Member
since 2007-02-07
Posts 392Philadelphia Pa USA |
Yo Secondhanddreampoet, This is truly excellent work. It moves along very smooth like. I dig it. Bobby |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
secondhanddreampoet, You are a literate poet, enjoyed. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
so beautiful of the sadness. there must be many , many good poems out of the hill later. You always write fine, emotional poems...with a sense of as broad and deep as the universe ....limitless but powerful. enjoyed as always. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
loved this |
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MindBodySoul Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 196NJ |
This is beautiful! Sadness mixed with tranquility... soothing! Thank you for sharing.. Jen--->MindBodySoul |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
The vision this poem created was so beautiful that it came alive for me...I saw stars moving across the heavens while sprinkling stardust on the hill...Absolutely magnificent...*Big Hugs* |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
you have most certainly captured the mystical portion of life, we humans experience....Bravo!!! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Et pour moi? sprinkle my ashes on a poetic passionate stardust trail! Well done, dream poet.  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bruce~ If I didn't know better .... I would swear that I wrote this - (at least my heart thinks so)  'Poet’s Eulogy When this ‘poetic heart’ be still, bury me by starlight on some distant hill, in silent-forest eulogy where my unanchored soul may dance, with galaxies drifting in and out of Time; and, my gentle voice forever whisper, (with forgiveness for all Life’s transgressions) of love’s eternal magic and Nature’s infinite truth!' You know what ? I reckon that's about the highest compliment I could pay you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
Bruce, this is perfection. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dear man...I suppose it is a poet thing to think of death while living...maybe even the other way around, you think? A lovely place to be, that hill. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You've got Marge thinking it could be one of hers... and reminding me of one of mine... *S* [URL=/main/forumdisplay.cgi?action=displayarchive&number=91&topic=000797]/main/forumdisplay.cgi?action=displayarchive&number=91&topic=000797[/UR L] Which means... we think ya done REAL good! *G* Beautiful work! *S* |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
... and this one, Bruce! How do you do it? There are no words to describe how fine this work is. I have to go outside and walk it and breathe it. |
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