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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
why does the cloak of night amplify a midnight breeze and the amphitheater of daytime's bustle silence the cacophony of a passing train how can I be cloistered amid a city's teeming throng yet be set free with just the thought of you |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Beautiful! ~how can I be cloistered amid a city's teeming throng yet be set free with just the thought of you~ someone very special ..... ~Terry ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
because of the marvelous happy times...the great love shared between the two, and the freedom one felt, along with great trust, fulfillment...not to mention...being a a spiritual place untarnished, with great things to learn, knowing and allowing...the submittal to this, without cause or fears... beautiful thoughts you have |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Lovely -Juju |
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mged Junior Member
since 2007-03-29
Posts 39ND |
holy cow this was so good |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
This is beautiful. Thank you. A |
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Jenna Member
since 2007-03-20
Posts 180 |
A very beautiful and moving write, very intense |
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Meggen Junior Member
since 2007-04-26
Posts 15St. Paul, Mn |
you can say it a hundred ways when you sit down to write it out, but only sometimes do you hit it right on the nail. good words. Megg. |
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