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Tim
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since 1999-06-08
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0 posted 2007-04-25 10:24 PM


why does the cloak of night
amplify a midnight breeze
and the amphitheater of daytime's bustle
silence the cacophony of a passing train
how can I be cloistered
amid a city's teeming throng
yet be set free
with just the thought of you

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TerryW
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since 2000-03-23
Posts 779
Louisville, Mississippi, USA
1 posted 2007-04-25 10:33 PM


Beautiful!

~how can I be cloistered
amid a city's teeming throng
yet be set free
with just the thought of you~

someone very special .....

~Terry

~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2007-04-26 06:42 AM


because of the marvelous happy times...the great love shared between the two, and the freedom one felt, along with great trust, fulfillment...not to mention...being a a spiritual place untarnished, with great things to learn, knowing and allowing...the submittal to this, without cause or fears...

beautiful thoughts you have

Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
3 posted 2007-04-26 08:32 AM


Lovely

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

mged
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since 2007-03-29
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ND
4 posted 2007-04-26 10:13 AM


holy cow this was so good
aziza
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
5 posted 2007-04-28 01:27 AM


This is beautiful.

Thank you.
A

Jenna
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since 2007-03-20
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6 posted 2007-04-28 05:09 AM


A very beautiful and moving write, very intense
Meggen
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since 2007-04-26
Posts 15
St. Paul, Mn
7 posted 2007-04-28 06:13 AM


you can say it a hundred ways when you sit down to write it out, but only sometimes do you hit it right on the nail. good words.

Megg.

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