Open Poetry #40 |
From the Bowels of Hell |
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
From the Bowels of Hell ~ Linda L. Dowd ~ Galloping across the barren moor, On a snorting, midnite steed, A horseman from the bowels of hell, Sought souls on which to feed. Demonic eyes of glowing red, Pierced the dead of night, Searching for its hapless victims, ~ Too mortified to fight. Banshees wailed as evil claimed, The souls of man and beast. Behind, there trailed a river of red, In the wake of voracious feast. An acrid smell assailed the air, The peat was soaked in blood. Those not slashed by wielded sword, Were tromped deep down in mud. Galloping across the barren moor, On a snorting, midnite steed, A horseman from the bowels of hell, Sought souls on which to feed. . |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
THANK YOU, Linda. I enjoyed greatly! I always thought that ghost riders in the sky were chasing the devil's herd. INclan |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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INclan ~ Hi, there! It's good to hear from you! I hope you have been well! I had a restless night of tossing and turning and woke with this poem clammering to be penned! Makes me wonder where I went in my astral travels! lol Take care & may your day be a happy one! Giving you a warm, welcome-back-home hug, EA |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Linda...Enjoyed this different subject matter from you. That must have really been a wierd journey you went on last night. Very good imagery within your words...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
reality is so truly painted here. scary picture. horror poem but true. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
YO! GIRL! You do have an exceptional talent to write expressively, but I like your sweet side better… JL Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Wo EA.....you sure can shivers up my back....lol. Truely gripping and excellent writing! KBHBLY..........lily jo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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Paul ~ My poem almost scares me! Mind you, it's just a figment of my vivid imagination! ~ or at least, I hope it is! Glad you stopped by! Love & LIGHT, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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Drauntz ~ I even scared myself with this one! lol Love & LIGHT EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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JL ~ Thank you for the nice compliment! ~ and I also prefer it when the "sweet" LIGHT side comes through! Mind you, it was rather fun to write down and dirty, so to speak! Love & LIGHT EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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iliana ~ Hi, girlfriend! Kinda sent shivers up my back as well! lol Sending a big hug-o-love from north of the 49th, Linda KBHBLY 2 |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
whoa... shivers and goosebumps here Linda Angel devils or angels your poems are equally great! |
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Rottiestyl Member
since 2007-04-19
Posts 60Illinois, USA |
Perfect flow and rhyme! I could here a deep male voice reciting this piece, Like James Earl Jones. Either I'm being visited by extras in my head this morning or this just emitted great vibes!
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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Lady Kate ~ Good morning! Thanks for reading this departure from the Light Side! lol I have to wonder where this one came from! Have a great day! LA |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
woah...Linda, this was sweet, as I do so love Science Fiction...this to me, was truly inspirational, scary, but beautifully done. Enjoyed this side of you.... Hugs to ya girl and have a great weekend |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Rottiestyl ~ Hi, there! Welcome aboard the pip ship! My goodness, your boys are BIG!!! ~ I gather they are Rottweilers! You're sure to be safe with them standing en garde! lol Yes! I too, can hear the deep resonant voice of James Earl Jones reciting this poem! I enjoyed your reply! Giving you a warm, welcoming hug, Earth Angel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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Lovely Lee ~ I appreciate your appreciation of this stretch of my poetic wings. May your W/E be a joyful one! Loves 'n hugs, Linda |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England |
Well.... It just goes to prove we are more alike than is comfortable! I have a feeling I know where this came from and maybe it's a wake up call as to the work you still have to do? Loved the work, wish I had written it, and am sure that it's not the last such piece we'll be reading... Enjoy your astra travels, but as pointed out in one of my poems (not sure if it's been posted yet) "make sure you mark the way back!" Namaste Ivor |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ivor ~ I do so know what you're talking about regarding the safe return from astral travels! I've been lost and couldn't find my way home! When I was younger, my 'landings' were hard and terrifying. I actually prefer to causal travel. The causal plane has beings of Light instead of the many n'er-do-wells one can fine on the astral plane. My first recollections of astral travelling were when I was only 5 years of age. I literally floated about 3 feet off of the floor and would check on my parents, my little brother and my baby sister. Thank you for your warm response, dear kindred spirit! Linda |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Oh, my heavens! *S* I finished this wondering what in the world you'd been reading before bed... so I couldn't help but smile at your comments. *S* Whatever the inspiration, it was your talent that harnassed the words into this chilling piece... bravo! *S* |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh yeah. Over the top and down the side, watch the demon soldiers ride. I love this one, girl. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. And yet there were those who were brave . |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England |
Linda, What does preference have to do with it? Ivor |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England |
One day whilst addressing a meeting my spirit it went for a ride. From up in the furthermost corner I watched what I said from the side. With a twang in my guts I snapped back then and wondered just what had I said. But the audience all semed quite happy not knowing from where they were fed. Not 'my' choice I'm afraid,... LOL |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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suthern One ~ Good morning, Belle! I thought you'd get a kick out of this poem if you happened to come upon it! I appreciate your kind comments and it is always a treat to read your responses! Loving hug from the Light Side Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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Pilgrimage ~ Howdy, Pilgrim! I'm pleased that you enjoyed the ride! lol Hugs 'n love, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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Huan Yi ~ Indeed! There will always be those who are brave of heart and stand strong in the face of adversity! It was good to hear from you! EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
ivor ~ 'Tis true. I may want to travel on the higher plane, but I often end up on the lower one! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ivor ~ I do so know what you mean! That has happened to me as well! ~ Especially when I am in a situation where I am uncomfortable and would rather be somewhere else! lol Enjoyed your poetic reply! Happy trails! Linda |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Wow! |
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