Open Poetry #40 |
A disappearing love |
Jenna Member
since 2007-03-20
Posts 180 |
I look at you you look at me, searching for what is lost. I stretch out move towards you need your love need to feel your warmth. Then there's that familar ache the fever that breaks out in me the drop in my stomach as I realise I am reaching out for something that isn't there |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
how sad. I love to read your poems which always have strong feelings-sad, anger, happy(not often). enjoyed |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh my but this poem touched me this day! I felt every word, and can relate to it more than you could ever imagine. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
been here, hurts like hell! write it out! Amy "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Then there's that familar ache...reaching out for something that isn't there~~~ that's it... M |
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