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I set you free
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I set you free |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
~*~ I set you free ~*~ Here I am I set you free Free from my heart eternally Free to roam Free to find your way home Free to crackle Another heart that is not mine Free to go on a quest sublime Free to collect Torrents of tears Free to recollect Unsought fears Free… Not to care But to dare And touch Another stream Drink from a fountain Sordid or pure Climb a mountain High or low You may forever go And … I… Will stand here Having set you free Impossible as that might be. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
sometimes the hardest part of loving someone, is letting them go...but in the end, the beginning for all concerned. Hugs |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
Poem of true love with dignity. wow. wow. strong emotion sinks all lines at the end. very much enjoyed |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
This sounds like a Margoptimism but it has honesty none-the-less. I like it a lot. a good commitee can decimate communication. |
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BlueEyes Member
since 2002-08-30
Posts 152TX, USA |
This hurts.... because it touches to the very core.... Beautiful write, courage beautifully portrayed.... Tera |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Excellent! |
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