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Breaking free |
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Jenna Member
since 2007-03-20
Posts 180 |
This has to be done though it doesn't feel right, I feel uneasy, scared and lost. I need you but so does someone else and I can't compete as I have nothing to give that is not already there. I can't wait in the shadows any longer or be seen as second best Can't deal with this constant feeling of clinging onto something that is soon to disappear. I know you won't understand and that you'll beg me to stay but i'm leaving and it's happening today. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jenna~ There is a lot of sad thought here ... but though we think the first step is the hardest to take ... sometimes it is the easiest once we set our feet on the path~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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BlueEyes Member
since 2002-08-30
Posts 152TX, USA |
Believe it or not, you'll be stronger for leaving than if you were to stay. No one deserves to be second best. Always remember that  Excellent write! |
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Savvy Junior Member
since 2007-04-18
Posts 19Washington State, USA |
Jenna, This is a very thought prevoking piece, heartfelt indeed. Keep your chin up, the hard times will soon pass, and the heartache won't last forever. There is someone out there that thinks you are the World's Greatest, and you don't even have to compete for that because you already have won that. Walking away is liberating and it is often for the best. -Kel Speak only well of others, and need not whisper. -Unknown |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
A sad heartfelt piece. Thank you for sharing. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
and I can't compete as I have nothing to give you shouldn't have to don't sell youself short, you have hords to give... believe it!!!!! |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
heartfelt, 'real', finely emotive! much applause! |
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