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Saturday at Cerritos Park
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Saturday at Cerritos Park |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
Men are chatting While barbecue on the green Wind is mild smoke is thin on the eucalyptus tree Leaves gently swing In mother’s beam Babies happily cling Clouds quietly tip by On the brilliant blue screen. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dear Drauntz.....I love that kind of day! |
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paullallady Member
since 2007-04-03
Posts 262Michigan |
you have described a beautiful day, touching my senses and emotions. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You transported me there! ~ and I liked the view and how calm it made me feel! Thanks! I needed that!   Linda |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Reminders of a time long since passed.....and missed. Thanks for the memory  |
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Andrew Sewell Junior Member
since 2007-04-16
Posts 24County Durham, England |
A wondeful view and a most enjoyable read. Andrew "Writing is not necessarily something to be ashamed of, but do it in private and wash your hands afterwards." - R.A. Heinlein. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...is this a park in Los Angeles or Cerritos California...James |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
Los Angeles |
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