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Andrew Sewell
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since 2007-04-16
Posts 24
County Durham, England
0 posted 2007-04-17 05:33 PM

Pools

Splashing mirror
that laps at stone shores
holds two moons
that ripple
as the waters part.


Andrew

"Writing is not necessarily something to be ashamed of, but do it in private and wash your hands afterwards." - R.A. Heinlein.
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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
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1 posted 2007-04-17 05:58 PM

beautiful. two moons...good. i thought that you  would tear the moon into pieces.

lovely
enjoyed.
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