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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2007-03-27 11:27 AM

Amber glow rolled in slow
over valleys awakened
by warming touch of
such beautiful hues where
breath taking views
danced across horizons canvas
painted in earth tones
of greens and blues

I breathed in
the quiet of you
and it filled me with
your essence of calm
where I felt safe from harm
and even now I can feel
two hearts lingering
in the silent still.

seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love. Axel Ekenstierna

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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1 posted 2007-03-27 12:39 PM

whew! this is just breath-takingly beautiful

hopefully I will be able to write like this soon

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2007-03-27 02:17 PM

Lovely, peace-filled Donna.
Very nicely penned.

An image reflected in a mirror,
a rainbow in the sky,
and a painted scene
make their impressions upon the mind,
but in essence are other than

TerryW
Senior Member

since 2000-03-23

Posts 779
Louisville, Mississippi, USA

3 posted 2007-03-27 03:40 PM

Truly beautiful. I love this poem.

Terry

~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2007-03-30 07:39 AM

Dixie, I like the way that you write just fine

Thank you.

Nancy sweetie, thanks. Yes....very peaceful feeling.

Terry, thank you, that was sweet of you to say.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2007-03-31 07:28 PM

Lovely...James

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

6 posted 2007-04-02 12:28 PM

quite excellent!...particularly:

"I breathed in
the quiet of you
and it filled me with
your essence of calm
where I felt safe from harm
and even now I can feel
two hearts lingering
in the silent...still."

it REALLY fits well with the quote!:

".....let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love."

Devious Intellectual
Member

since 2006-05-08

Posts 112

7 posted 2007-04-02 02:21 AM

i like the last stanza, it was really nice and the first was a nice set up for the last part nice

unholyjudgement
Member

since 2007-02-27

Posts 116
Wherever my soul takes me next