Open Poetry #40 |
Blue |
Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. I have lived All these years For your gaze Not the sun’s light Rising in the East An autumn moon Over a calm lake Has ever had the influence Of your eyes I wake in the morning Grateful for another day Go to bed at night Content in what I had You are the reason There’s beauty and poetry In my world . . . It’s just something again I thought you should know . |
||
© Copyright 2007 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved | |||
Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
What a beautiful, warm poem! Dear John. One person's contentment will make other people's life more hopeful. grateful for life going so far when young life floating silently around...is the strength to go further. beautiful and with power! |
||
LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beautifully articulated with a far away richness that most never acquire, let alone, understand.... |
||
Andrew Sewell Junior Member
since 2007-04-16
Posts 24County Durham, England |
Beautifully written. Andrew |
||
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
sighsighsigh oh and did i bother to say sigh too? |
||
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
||
Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
I wish I had found the pot of gold that you found at the bottom of your rainbow...maybe I still will..... ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
||
Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. . The inspiration . . . Thanks all John |
||
Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
An inspirational poem for an equally inspirational work of art. Thanks for sharing... |
||
Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
Sir Balladeer the painting is from your website. Whose painting is it? or if there is a story about it? or I'll make a joke. |
||
miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Very beautiful. Much enjoyed. |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |