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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas 
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Crazy, you know, that one can love so uncontrollably. . . . as did I. With a fire that sucked the breath from my heart, stole my soul, lay it bare . . . for her. With a love that filled the years since day one, sped them up till they passed like the wind, slowing only to give us the nights when the fire burned long and bright. Uncontrollably taking our breath away. Crazy. Uncontrollably. . . . still there, Tonight. © wesley james beard, jr. |
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Robert Jordan Member
since 2007-02-07
Posts 392Philadelphia Pa USA |
Jwesley, Yeah, this is allright. It's well written, and has a great ending. I like it loads. Bobby |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Its nice to express appreciation...James |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
hey you~~ it's nice when it's ...still there.  M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful write Jimmy!!! Much enjoyed.  For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Wow!! James, what a testimony!! Not many can say the love and all that is still there, after years of being!! Congratulations for you two, and cherish what you have. Gary and I cherish our love every day!! Hugs, Ethel |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
wow. love, what a wonderful gift. enjoy and enjoy wholeheartly. beautiful. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Jimmy...you are a lucky man!  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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paullallady Member
since 2007-04-03
Posts 262Michigan |
what a beautiful tribute to the one you love, wonderful. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
May both your fires continue to burn long and bright, forever more!  I would say that you are BOTH very fortunate, indeed! Loving hug 'n a smile, Linda |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This makes me smile big time Jimmy, and re-affirms in me the idea that love can be real. SO touching, this.  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Jimmy, it is so nice to read you again... I think, those of us who have had the blessed opportunity to know and feel this type of love, regardless if it is returned, are the lucky ones, yanno beautiful prose |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
BRAVO!!! A wonderful tribute to the lady you love....BRAVO!!!....*Big Hugs* |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
uncontrollably...yes. I understand that.  loved this |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
ahhhhhhhh to be loved like that ahhhhhhhh |
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BlueEyes Member
since 2002-08-30
Posts 152TX, USA |
Ahhh... I know the feeling too well of moments that pass by so fast, you just want to slow the world down and savor every single second... Wonderful, beautiful, amazing write... Much enjoyed |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JWesley~ Oh yes ... certifiable ... that's me~  And now ... you've got me singing Patsy Cline !!!!! *sigh* *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Smiling here, at your romantic heartwrite! |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Romanticism....real, emotive, and fine! applause! |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Wow! This is as smooth as silk and very romantic. Enjoyed. miscellanea |
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