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Open Poetry #40

Room With A View

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-04-14 06:07 PM

Room With A View

Fine silk pajama's
the only thing
between me and you,
in the morning
while sipping coffee,
my desiring eyes
admire the view.

JamesLee
14April
2007

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2007-04-14 08:30 PM

~smiling~

M

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

2 posted 2007-04-14 10:09 PM

I'm smiling too

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

3 posted 2007-04-15 02:37 AM

charming!

beautiful expression.

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

4 posted 2007-04-15 04:02 AM

WOW...I loved it. Pretty smooth.

Thank you

"Oh...me!Oh Life!
Of the questions of

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2007-04-15 12:39 PM

Your eyes caress the view and your pen follows the inspiration lovingly.

Love,
Margherita

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

6 posted 2007-04-15 05:02 PM

.

Good Jim

.

John

paullallady
Member

since 2007-04-03

Posts 262
Michigan

7 posted 2007-04-16 09:49 AM

this is really sweet, portraying an image and a feeling with very little words.

Andrew Sewell
Junior Member

since 2007-04-16

Posts 24
County Durham, England

8 posted 2007-04-16 11:15 AM

Thanks for the great read, you managed to convey an incredibly charming scene with such brevity and I really enjoyed the read.

Andrew.

"Writing is not necessarily something to be ashamed of, but do it in private and wash your hands afterwards." - R.A. Heinlein.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2007-04-17 09:25 PM

Thank you nakdthoughts, The Lady, Drauntz, My Enchanted, Margherita, Huan Yi, paullallady and Andrew for the wonderful responses...much appreciated...James

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