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The Final Cry
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The Final Cry |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
The Final Cry Broken heart bleeds inside her breast Fingers clench bruising woman skin Tears on the headstone where he rests His last note crushed against her chest Sanity held by silk thread thin Broken heart bleeds inside her breast She curses God for His cruel test Arms long to hold her love again Tears on the headstone where he rests Why does death rip away the best Why not select the ones who sin Broken heart bleeds inside her breast Fingers stroke where he last caressed She longs to brush a kiss on him Tears on the headstone where he rests She cries for all the life he missed Shards of screams carried in the wind Broken heart bleeds inside her breast Tears on the headstone where he rests --- Alison |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
it is another beautiful one. very emotional. |
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ladylisa Member
since 2007-04-29
Posts 342Florida USA |
such a gripping write. thank you. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Thank you both. Your comments mean a lot to me. A |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
so sad Alison and beautifully done... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Alison... oh my! such beautifully penned words here of love, loss and longing... well done gorgeous girl RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Thank you, lovely ladies. Your words bring a smile to my face -- I am glad that the poem moved you. A |
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