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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Overwhelmed Reality The days' darkness has overcome the tears of the afternoon, unexpected, yet there all the same to hinder thoughts of you. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is so lovely and melancholy Maureen.. Yes, I do believe it can be both at the same time. Beautifully penned in 20+1.  Sending hugs your way~  For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
"anyway, i am not happy". Did you notice green are softer and flowers are softer in a cloudy day? enjoyed. short but full of emotions. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
very real, concise, emotive! bravo! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
It poured on me while trying to work outside...dark clouds, rain and thoughts of... Thanks, M |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Maureen, this was beautiful and I understand the melancholy with dark clouds and rain ...  I wondered about 20 plus 1 as a title! And reading Nancy's reply I tried to count the words and yes that was it. Never heard of this form. I try to imagine my loved ones up there as happy, then I can't be sad. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Devious Intellectual Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 112 |
this was nice and short and to the point, love stuff like thissss |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Margherita, another poet here ( MARK V SHELDON) started titling his poems as "less than 20" or "less than 10" and every so often I like to leave him a poem of a less or more than to know that I am thinking of him and miss his short thoughtfilled creations. M |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Maureen, in you, all the memories of the past live on to bring comfort and joy to others. Whenever I read your work I'm reminded about how deeply you think and how much your emotional depth impacts on others. Well done. a good commitee can decimate communication. |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
enjoyed this M bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
How beautifully penned. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
miss ya |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
M, it's amazing how much warmth you projected beyond those dark clouds, and with so few words.  |
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Topheth Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 297Texas |
Pleasant read - enjoyed. Yeah! I love the 20 or unders. "You inspire; I desire – and refrain; you sustain." |
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