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Open Poetry #40

No Need to Please

aziza
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since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

0 posted 2007-06-04 04:11 AM

I don’t need to please you
Anymore
I used to, you know
But now
I’ll just do it this way
And you
Can just sit back and watch
Because
I don’t need to please you
Anymore

--

Alison

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2007-06-04 04:27 AM

Nice...James

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2007-06-04 06:54 AM

ms az..I like the message, and the poem

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

3 posted 2007-06-04 09:46 AM

James

Thank you

Alison

----

DS

You know what I mean.
Thank you.

A

Jenna
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since 2007-03-20

Posts 180

4 posted 2007-06-04 12:52 PM

I could really relate to this. Thankyou.

It is so true.

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

5 posted 2007-06-04 01:01 PM

oh, sad. sad is how I feel.

enjoyed.

Robert Jordan
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since 2007-02-07

Posts 392
Philadelphia Pa USA

6 posted 2007-06-04 02:36 PM

Aziza,

This is a very well structured poem. That's very good.

Bobby

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

7 posted 2007-06-04 10:12 PM

love it Alison!

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

8 posted 2007-06-05 05:48 AM

yes, I agree... well said! RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2007-06-05 09:16 AM

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

10 posted 2007-06-05 10:11 PM

Thank you all

I never find tapping into one's strength and independence sad.

A

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

11 posted 2007-06-07 10:49 PM

effective 'write'!

Applause!!

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