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marcel
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0 posted 2007-04-07 03:02 AM



Dwindling Faith

I can only do so much
Hiding behind fear and golden pages
When my soul goes against the word
Condemning my reflection to self-loathing
In a drug induced freedom of a sort
Letting go of inhibitions
And giving into everything I hate
To become invisible to what is not;
And though I know He still protects me,
Who is to say, He still loves me the sameā€¦.

Marcel


© Copyright 2007 keith marcel - All Rights Reserved
unholyjudgement
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1 posted 2007-04-07 03:17 AM


Truly a very enjoyable read.
Thank you

My mind is like lightning
One brilliant flash and its gone

Jenna
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2 posted 2007-04-07 05:40 AM


very thought provoking and well written
ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2007-04-07 03:03 PM


The power in the simple honesty of your poetry is so striking.  I always come away with reverence whispering in my heart.
Nicely done.

May Easter shine warmly on you Keith.

Startime55
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4 posted 2007-04-07 03:52 PM


Powerful words that pull at the heart...Well done...*Big Hugs*
passing shadows
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5 posted 2007-04-08 05:46 AM


a touching piece Keith
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6 posted 2007-04-08 08:25 AM


Introspective, heartfelt honesty so poignantly written! Be gentle with your heart and mind.
Angel4aKing
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7 posted 2007-06-22 05:19 PM


I have related to this too recently...it really touches me to know I am not the only one that has gone through something like this. Take Care....

~~~kingsangel~~~

[This message has been edited by Angel4aKing (06-22-2007 06:37 PM).]

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