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Dwindling Faith
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Dwindling Faith |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
Dwindling Faith I can only do so much Hiding behind fear and golden pages When my soul goes against the word Condemning my reflection to self-loathing In a drug induced freedom of a sort Letting go of inhibitions And giving into everything I hate To become invisible to what is not; And though I know He still protects me, Who is to say, He still loves me the same…. Marcel |
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unholyjudgement Member
since 2007-02-27
Posts 116Wherever my soul takes me next |
Truly a very enjoyable read. Thank you My mind is like lightning |
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Jenna Member
since 2007-03-20
Posts 180 |
very thought provoking and well written |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The power in the simple honesty of your poetry is so striking. I always come away with reverence whispering in my heart. Nicely done. May Easter shine warmly on you Keith. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Powerful words that pull at the heart...Well done...*Big Hugs* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a touching piece Keith |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Introspective, heartfelt honesty so poignantly written! Be gentle with your heart and mind.  |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
I have related to this too recently...it really touches me to know I am not the only one that has gone through something like this. Take Care.... ~~~kingsangel~~~ [This message has been edited by Angel4aKing (06-22-2007 06:37 PM).] |
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