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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Waitress I knew a waitress once. After many years of abuse she had a plan, to get free from a controlling, manipulating man. And she executed it (him) quite successfully. I know, because that man was me. JamesLee 17June 2007 Check out the movie "Waitress" at your local theatre. That man was me. |
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lacydee Member
since 2007-06-17
Posts 130Indiana |
awww..I'm so sorry..what a sad write. lacydee |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Interesting, James and well-written. Alison |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
You? there is poetry in knowing. The Waitress, I'll have to check out. ((hugs)) reg |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
profound. thought on the surface is romantic. Good. To tell you the truth, the waitress to me related to Ayn Rand. enjoyed |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Aboslutely wonderful write my friend!!! jwesley |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I am trying to get a second part time job as a waitress...I figure at the right place, the tips will be good and it will be worth working all those hours a day  of course there is no man to get free from...just a really heavy car payment LOL I love your poems James |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
well done James |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you lacydee, aziza, rwood, Drauntz, j wesley, passing shadows and The Lady for the nice responses... Passing shadows my ex-wife was a waitress for many years and made very good tips... I like having a favorite waitress when I go to a restaurant...the one with the outgoing friendly personality that seems to be so cool and efficient... I have never watched a movie, such as "Waitress" that reminded me so much of my past, the relationship between myself and my ex-wife. The things I put her through, its no wonder she divorced me...I told my three sons to watch it because it reminded me of myself and their mom...James |
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