Open Poetry #40 |
Poets Pen |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Poets Pen A poet’s mind is never done In sarcasm or just in fun Writing history or casting love It rides a dragon or a dove It takes you to the very edge With sympathy or just a pledge It fills you full of awe and fears Or echoes you with whispered dears It wheels you into dark extremes Or zeal’s you into lover’s dreams It sails you into sunders far Or makes you wonder who you are. It is an art that fills the mind With structured or unstructured find That sings a song of come along And seldom minds the right or wrong A poet is an alchemist An enzyme of a magic mist |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
and your poetry happens to be among my favorites! always enjoy reading you so much |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SEA My pleasure and thank you. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
One thing for sure is, I am always wondering, who am I? You, my friend, are among the very best poets. [This message has been edited by SmartChick (06-17-2007 01:22 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SmartChick Thank you I enjoyed your reply. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vandana Thank you dear. |
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RogueandPoet Member
since 2007-06-04
Posts 126Oregon |
Absolutely wonderful piece. I loved it! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rogueand Thank you so much. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"It sails you into sunders far Or makes you wonder who you are." Oh my ... heavenly phrasing throughout, Sy. Really beautiful. You've captured that whole rainbow of a poet's world here. Just lovely! Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kit For a slender torso you pull allot of weight with me. Thank you |
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perfect stranger Member
since 2006-05-29
Posts 54on cloud 9 |
what a lovely heart felt poem. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
yes, a poet is all of that, and much more. Your poetry makes me smile, Sir Sey... thank you. |
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lacydee Member
since 2007-06-17
Posts 130Indiana |
This was so good, and so true. I enjoyed reading it very much. lacydee as for me and my house, we will serve the Lord. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
lacydee Thank you so much for the read and reply. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
yes, yes, you are very right Sir. very right. enjoyed your poem as always. I am teasing your friend Balladeer in the back yard. quite a fun. but your poem is always a beauty to enjoy...true feelings. have a wonderful dream tonight. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Drauntz Thank you for your kind reply, I always enjoy reading them. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"A poet is an alchemist" and you Sir Sy write words of pure gold |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady, You ae a dear. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
very fine (and most enjoyable) 'write'! applause!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
secondhanddreampoet Thank you so much for the read and comment. |
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