Open Poetry #40 |
Remembered |
Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Everything passes- Only emptiness remains...brief yet eternal. And formless thoughts once traced beneath the ache of momentary fingers, Fall in tender folds against the void. Everything passes- And still there is a rise again to what once held form. We are at once all that ever passes and the emptiness that remains. We are the ache beneath momentary fingers. Remembered. [This message has been edited by Ericc (04-03-2007 08:17 PM).] |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"We are the ache beneath momentary fingers." Excellent! Okay then - most excellent! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Everything passes yes it does a fine read for my eyes and mind tonight Eric |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
nicely done Ericc....your talent does not wane.. |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
Nice picturesque poetry! Hugs Kimberly |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
We are the ache beneath momentary fingers. I think man is so busy looking for His one true love, his soul mate, never realizing...she/he has been there all the time... excellent poem |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: And remembering brings back deep emotions. You are the one crossing all boundaries, keeping IT all PRESENT. Sometimes I ache for this type of ache. It can bring tears of such intensity and release ... and the peace of knowing. Wonderful words, dear Eric. Loving you, Margherita |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Magnificent |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eric~ There is such poignant beauty in your thoughts~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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