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Peach Junior Member
since 2002-11-17
Posts 33 |
call me names watch me flinch twist and bend emotions flare pick me up to throw me down at the pain you stare push and pull the tears measure as they fill up hold the reigns and take control empty and fill my cup I beg for mercy you hear my plea but will you ever just let me be If you don't stand for something, you'll fall for anything. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cool ending line there that's what I say all the time! |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
how sad. I can not bear to hear that a tender heart is crying for mercy. Sometimes the price of love can be a toutured heart. very sad. |
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paullallady Member
since 2007-04-03
Posts 262Michigan |
you did a good job of describing the deep emotion of being hurt by someone. great ending. |
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