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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Alright Now listen up You little worm I’m in charge That means Top of the pyramid Master lord the big dog King emperor boss Alpha male of the universe The man I don’t care Who you think you are Much less your thoughts On right or wrong So if you want Any chance at all All I want To hear from you Is prayers praises Each sun that rises And every night Amen . |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
What a grandiose poem. "I" must wear a halo now...a shining halo. It is not your common type...very light hearted. I laughed and laughed seriously. Amen to your last three verses. very much enjoyed. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a bit of a turn off but a fine poem nonetheless |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Thank you both A Jewish friend in discussing the story simply shugged and said: "God's not a nice guy." Thanks again John |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
by the way...when I first read this, I thought it was "I'm in change" instead of "I'm in charge" (what can you expect from a few beers too many?) and so my poem came from this thank you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you truly do inspire even when you don't mean to  |
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