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Open Poetry #40

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Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

0 posted 2007-04-01 12:59 PM

“keep well!”
Was all you said
With tears
You left.

Moon was high
In the warm breeze
My heart was dry
And breath was freeze.

You left
Without saying bye
Why?

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2007-04-01 01:04 PM

no one likes goodbyes

for some, it's impossible

good poem

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2007-04-01 02:38 PM

Love the rhythm in this!

Love,
Margherita

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

3 posted 2007-04-01 03:31 PM

Strange how we all always want to know "why" when it really doesn't change anything. Understanding does not necessarily bring peace but I wish you peace if this write is from personal experience.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2007-04-01 08:27 PM

I would like to echo Honeybunch's response. She took the words right out of my "fingers".

Welcome to piptalk! May it become your home away from home, as it has become for so many of we kindred spirits! Welcome aboard!

Giving you a warm, welcoming hug,

Earth Angel

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