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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Less Thans Time keeps getting away from me, its meaning only useful in the early morn when the thoughts are of you. ~~*~~ Missing, a voice from the inside, invisible cheerleader of giving strength that even she was lacking. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I loved how you describe the deepest of thought in the first paragraph, this said so much...of the power of thought... you have said so so much with effortless magnitisum.... Good Morning  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MzBliss~ These are beautiful remembering thoughts~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"invisible cheerleader of giving" <----great line here! I enjoyed these thoughts of time. always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Beautifully written of thoughts I can relate to. Hope you are doing well. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I hope this humble 'reply' post brings this fine 'write' back to the top of the 'P.I.P.' queue for awhile! I was just pondering Time's fugacious whimsy before coming upon: "Time keeps getting away from me, its meaning only useful in the early morn when the thoughts are of you." In a Universe that has been eternally expanding for some 15 billion years; and, on a planet that has experienced relentless change for 4.6 billion years.... does 'Time' really have any 'meaning' at all? (...do we?!) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
nodding through the tears It's just very raw, lately, isn't it? love you mo  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you Bruce for bringing it back up Karen, I know, ever since the shoe poems I have been thinking about my sister and hoping she is looking down on me and approving... life is hard...but is worth the while M |
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DennisTheMenace Member
since 2005-09-04
Posts 240 |
time always gets away from me, time for this to rise agin |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A very intense write, dear Maureen. I am glad I got a chance to read this. Love, Margherita |
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