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Open Poetry #40

Rainbows in rapture!

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2007-03-31 08:03 PM

Rainbows in rapture!
Rhythmic thundering cadence,
Liquid lightnings dance!

Inspired by secondhanddreampoet's
"Stormy haiku" /pip/Forum103/HTML/001835.html

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

1 posted 2007-03-31 08:49 PM

This fine version is better than the original!!

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2007-04-01 12:23 PM

Oh yes!

.....jo

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2007-04-01 10:08 AM

well done!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2007-04-01 10:23 AM

Beautiful Kacy....well done!

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2007-04-01 02:41 PM

Highly enjoyable visions!

Love,
Margherita

arbpoet
Junior Member

since 2006-11-22

Posts 38

6 posted 2007-04-01 08:21 PM

Very good and beautiful

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2007-04-01 08:34 PM

Electrifying!

Linda

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