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Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

0 posted 2007-03-30 11:00 AM

They tried to deliver yesterday
a dream with dramatic scenes
invisibly open to interpretation
and inspection by reality.

The inn is too full; determined they came
set on the claim of supremacy
over the needs of the flesh
decreed by me an honourable state.

Tears littered the base of human disgrace
that refused to accept and rejected
dream after dream of soul avowals
tendered as right sufficiency.

I walked through the stream
choosing, you see, simply to not believe
but I am the dreamer who knows
there will always be room for a soul.

But soul for soul, flesh for the flesh,
dreams desolate out in the cold,
until the many miles are crossed
and the dreamers can meet
at a place of complete belief!

Helen / 30 March 2007

Bustababe
New Member

since 2007-03-30

Posts 4
Montreal, Canada

1 posted 2007-03-30 11:09 AM

I really liked it. It was good and it made me think. I like your style of writting.

TerryW
Senior Member

since 2000-03-23

Posts 779
Louisville, Mississippi, USA

2 posted 2007-03-30 11:56 AM

Oh, dear friend...

"But soul for soul, flesh for the flesh,
dreams desolate out in the cold,
until the many miles are crossed
and the dreamers can meet
at a place of complete belief! "

So beautiful.

Loved it!!!

~~Terry

~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

3 posted 2007-03-30 03:37 PM

Thanks Bustababe and Terry for the read. Much appreciated!

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

4 posted 2007-03-30 05:37 PM

Beautiful poem, great imagery.

By the way, your namesake ewe delivered beautiful twins this afternoon, a boy and a girl. Photos will follow.

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2007-04-02 10:15 PM

Enjoyed...James

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2007-04-02 10:22 PM

This poem brings the old brain out of the
closet and makes me think...well said.

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