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Bustababe
New Member

since 2007-03-30

Posts 4
Montreal, Canada

0 posted 2007-03-30 11:07 AM

Details of Love.

Never shall I love again,
For love is nothing but a sin.
For all who wish that they could feel,
Love is anything but real.

Everytime I fall,
I seem to stand up again.
Just to get knocked down,
And drench myself in rain.

I try not to open my heart,
But in the end it gets ripped apart.
Love is cruel and for lies,
Love is the fuel.

No matter how happy I was,
There has always been sadness closely behind.
No matter how hard I tried...
Love is impossible to find.

I have thought I found it,
And they had told me they loved me too.
But when my heart doth breaks,
All I can say is thank you.

For making me stronger,
And for allowing me to see,
That love is nothing speacial,
And that I run into it so blindly.

After these last few tries,
I learned that even the strongest man cries.
And I'm alright with that,
Because life consists of many goodbyes.

For all of you who broke me,
Just know that I am fine.
For all of you who loved me,
You've been lying to yourself all this time.

I keep telling myself,
After every goodbye,
Around the corner,
There will always be a Hi.

A new chance at something,
But look at is as hope,
I know what you're thinking,
I must be on dope,
But the more you throw yourself at love,
The harder you'll hit the wall.
After every push and shove,
Stay on your feet and try not to fall.

TerryW
Senior Member

since 2000-03-23

Posts 779
Louisville, Mississippi, USA

1 posted 2007-03-30 11:58 AM

Very powerful write!

I have been in that place before too. I know where the feeling comes from. Just keep pouring it into your poetry -- this one rocks!

~~Terry

~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

2 posted 2007-03-30 03:35 PM

"Because life consists of many goodbyes"

Indeed it does! Never lose faith in love - it is, in the end, what gives us strength.

Fairplay
Member

since 2007-01-15

Posts 222
England

3 posted 2007-03-30 05:39 PM

Hey we have lots of experts in this field I am sure........

Ahh you live in Montreal
Love… don’t the Frenchies Know it all
Some are dumb and others dummer (TV Advert)
Did you say you were a plummer?
Motreal can be quite chilly
It doesn’t mean you must be silly (edited here)
For even though there may be frost
Its still better to have “Loved and Lost
So dry your eyes stop that cryin
You’ll find Love Just Keep On Tryin!

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

4 posted 2007-03-30 06:19 PM

To love is the feeling of doing
To be loved is the feeling of perceiving
They are both strangers
Patiently, politely and be prepared
to handle them.

great happiness comes from handling process.
Talk to strangers.

enjoyed your poem.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2007-03-30 10:27 PM

Enjoyed...James

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2007-03-30 11:08 PM

I like the take and pull of give and get, Spike. I also appreciate the time you've given the reader to delve into your emotions.

Please, check for a very special Email...as we Welcome you to Passions!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2007-03-31 06:30 PM

welcome

thanks for sharing this...I relate

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

8 posted 2007-03-31 06:50 PM

.

http://www.contemplator.com/ireland/wooing.html

And thank God for it . . .

John

PS Bust a babe . . .
Are we hunting?

.

unholyjudgement
Member

since 2007-02-27

Posts 116
Wherever my soul takes me next

9 posted 2007-04-01 11:49 PM

u have the gift of raw power

My mind is like lightning
One brilliant flash and its gone

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

10 posted 2007-04-02 09:49 PM

Ah, A good first posting. I look forward to reading more of your work. Welcome to Passions.
Regards,
INclan

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

11 posted 2007-04-02 10:17 PM

Welcome..and thanx for sharing this piece
of humanity with us.

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