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Keeper Come
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Keeper Come |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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He weaves his way into my thoughts it is as though surely he knows that I am in need of the presence of him I dare not attempt to avoid the come of his keep for the fire has need of the sticks he brings flame from embers he stirs I burst into new warmth Keeper come I await~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
you show great resiliance of faith enjoyed this emmensly |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Softly and beautifully spoken dear Marge.  I do hope the keeper of the fire heard you. ~ Time has cast a spell on you, So you won't ever forget me. ~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Beautiful! Such a wonderful tribute. JL  Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
Marge such a moving write. I loved it and could so identify with it. Thank you Hugs Kimberly |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
My experience of the presence of our creator is both male and female--or maybe, more precisely, neither. (and no, I don't intend a disagreement here, because I do know this feeling) I much enjoyed the, well, serenity of this! |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: Awareness of another dimension is reward in itself! I enjoyed this! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
You KNOW what I think about this one.....gets me right here, it does. Such things always -- always -- have their effect, whether we ever know of it or not. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Keeper come! I await~ surely He knows that I am in need of the presence of Him! So true and so intense spoken, thank you for sharing dear Marge (((hugs))) Theresia |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
beautifully done Marge |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
*squeeze* Love this, Marge...and you. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 awesome! |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
 awesomeMy spirit will rise |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I am waiting, too. Loved this, Marge! *hugs*....jo |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is so beautiful, Marge. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
This is lovely, Marge. I've been thinking lately that those who try to "avoid" perhaps suffer more and so just in case I too await. |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
This piece is breath taking!!! BRAVO! always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thanks everyone ... the embers of the fire need the attend of the keeper~ I do hope he comes ... soon~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
May your wait be richly rewarded... This is beautiful! |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Marge.. It's been long since I came here.Your poetry, as always, a delight to read. And today, it felt like a fresh breeze brushing me softly reminding me of old days here. Thank you so much *hugs* |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
enjoyed very much. And a wonderful lesson for me. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thanks all ... I'm not able to read the replies due to an apparent 'glitch' at the moment ... but gonna put a 'THANKEE' here in the hopes that it will clear up the problem~ Heck fire ... all other poems at PiP are opening up for me but this one is being as obstinate as the Keeper that hasn't come to the fire~  Upsie-daisy-doodle~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
That do-did-done it ... *whistle* ... Ron ... it was a cyber-critter, but I got it under exterminator wraps !!! Continue on with what you were doing~  HI ENCHANTRESS~  *Huglets* ~*The Persistent Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Marge, quote: such beautiful, trustful expressions here! A prayer that is heard, no doubt. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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