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Love's Shores
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Love's Shores |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Love’s Shores Wave on wave time upon time emotions riding memory, desires rippling in the moonlight... lost in love’s riptide to passion’s undertow... heart-dreams left stranded, helpless before the dawn! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
secondhanddreampoet Truly a necklace of quality, enjoyed. |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Very good and strong read. Thanks for sharing. |
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Aurelian Member
since 2007-03-20
Posts 109TX, USA |
I really liked this one's dreamlike and meditative quality. A truly evocative piece. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The shimmer of this, certainly a jewel. Enjoyed reading you. TD |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
The Chinese sages believed their purpose was to follow the order of their nature and destiny. They studied the tao of heaven and called it the dark and the light. They considered the earth's nature to be the yielding and the firm. The tao of man they called love and dignity. You've got a subtle, compelling dark and light thing going on here, and firm meets yielding. Rythmic and lyrical. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
hi! The surging tides, the ripples within reflection, the riffle of a river...all movement I see within this passion. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"heart-dreams left stranded, helpless before the dawn!" sad and delicately lovely |
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