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Welcoming the new day |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 *** Welcoming the new day *** While spotting the morning star welcome dawn with a smile let your gaze roam along the pink tinted horizon embrace the sky and the earth and whisper softly "I love you". Then watch the glowing light of the new day expanding and hear the answer vibrating deep within your heart: "I love you too!". *** |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
You always write beautifully. and the picture is breathe taking. Your comments on other people's writing are always warm and encouraging. And I like your ending "with love' too. |
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outlawthunder Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 67 |
a passion for living on an earth that has so many precious possibilities. in a world that seems so bent on violence and destruction, you write of the simple value of love, appreciation, humility, partnership betweeen the earth we live on, the skies we see morning to night, and the critical importance of simple respect for the power of love. a stunning piece with my highest regards, OUTLAWTHUNDER |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
very, very grand-pleasant! Thank you for this most uplifting 'write'! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"I love you" and "I love you too." Some of my favorite words...James |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I watched the sun come up this morning and felt the love you describe thank you for this enlightenment Margherita |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Thank you for singing the sun to life...this poem is absolutely beautiful...*Big Hugs* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I kept coming back to this yesterday because of its beauty but never replied love it! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
So nice. JL  Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you all, I enjoyed your kind replies! Love, Margherita |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
left me smiling~~ M |
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Robert Jordan Member
since 2007-02-07
Posts 392Philadelphia Pa USA |
Margherita, The idea behind this is very good. I like it. Bobby |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Even better than coffee and a donut! Serenity and gratitude in your poem. What a lovely way to start the day! Thank you. K |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
What a wonderful way to start the day! - Owl |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dear Margherita This morning just at dawn, a clap of thunder and downpour awoke the dry of southern California...lovely to listen to. Your poem is a beautiful love song...thanks for your generous heart.  |
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paullallady Member
since 2007-04-03
Posts 262Michigan |
what a beautiful piece of poetry, so descriptive and heartfelt. I really liked this. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Margherita, this poem indeed made me feel warm and fuzzy picturing the moment at sunrise or sunset, even when it's about one in the morning here, as indeed love always has a way of resonating back the minute you give yourself, yay! (sigh) Your poems lift my spirits as always, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Margherita, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" |
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