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Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa

0 posted 2007-07-05 02:50 PM


The witch and the wizard
one day made a pact
to go it alone without love
and life was good
with the birds and the bees
until flowers closed ranks
and the trees grew no leaves.

Magic, you see, not a mythical king
called “time” on the play-act of life
and set in motion a devious plan
to suffer the witch and the wizard
to come again unto love.

Swords were drawn by that good man of war
and the witch traded tears with her peers
because a turn, turn around, humbles a man  
and makes a woman a servant to him.

And so with the stubbornness of a mule
the wizard sought refuge in caves  
and the witch, poor dear, took up her broom
and flew off in a different direction.

For many a year magic prevailed
within that kingdom of dreams
where wizards and witches unite
and make of love a true delight.

But magic, my friends, never can last
if wizards too weak can’t open a heart
and witches leave cobwebs untouched  
around yesterday’s manifesto.

Magic is dead - squashed like a bug
when we go it alone without love!

Helen / 5 July 2007


© Copyright 2007 Helen - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2007-07-05 04:29 PM


I must admit, that when I read the title, a gasp escaped my lips! Our beloved cat, Magic, died a few months ago, and your title brought back the pain of her loss. But never fear, my dear, it was but for a fleeting moment.

Keep those cobwebs from closing your heart, Honey! There is a wonderful wizard out there looking for you! Mind you, there is one wizard that I know to be unavailable and he is the husband of our Enchanting One.

Perhaps in the mid of nite your wizard shall appear and will come lie by your side! winky wink

Great metaphorical writing!

Loving hug,
Linda

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2007-07-05 08:42 PM


great story and ending


poettothecars
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since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093
New Zealand
3 posted 2007-07-05 09:28 PM


This is incredible and pure heart, and art too

CWH

a poet who cares

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
4 posted 2007-07-06 03:16 AM


Linda - I'm so very sorry for bringing back a bad memory even if just for a fleeting moment.  However, I don't believe your Magic is dead - just unseen.  Hmm?  I wouldn't say that wizards aren't capable of lying next to one in the dead of night or the day for that matter.  

Dixie - thanks so much for the read.

CWH - Good to see you here.  Thank you.

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