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Align to me |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 * * * Align to me Beyond your walls of fortification against attacks by an unfriendly world, despite dark clouds and luring flames, your beauty and trust long to bloom, like a glorious delicate cactus flower born in midst of defensive spines. You can sip at pure love’s chalice, head on the wings of your desire to the core of everything that is, all the portals open to daring souls who remember their immortality even in the face of apparent chaos. Listen to my tune and align to me receive the shower of my tears create a pond within your heart keep it transparent and dazzling for these tears are the essence of my overwhelming happiness. Move through your reminiscent moods, climb tenaciously upwards to the peak enjoy the embrace of crystalline air, lose your mind over the utter splendor peel off all the layers of illusion, let your soul bloom and surrender. Listen to my tune and align to me. Beyond fear and earthly limitations there are hidden treasures waiting, pink horizons unfold and open wide for your soul riding gossamer clouds reaching untold heights and endless skies. Align to me ... * * * |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
Beautiful, beautiful, dear Margherita again the picture is beautiful too. I do not know why, the last verse of your poem always in my mind for many days. last time is "I walk into life, I walk into you." enjoyed. write more. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, Margherita! There be not a man who would be able to decline such an invitation! ~ "Align with me"  "peel off all the layers of illusion, let your soul bloom and surrender." ~ I was sighing with every line I read. Your poetry has mass appeal ~ and for many a good reason!  Love, Angelo Terrestre (Did I spell that correctly? lol) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...James |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Margherita this simply leaves me speechless and it doesn't get any better than that! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I think this is one of the best poems you have posted..and the picture is perfect (and lovely!) M |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I love such grand-fine images as: “against attacks by an unfriendly world, despite dark clouds and luring flames, your beauty and trust long to bloom” “head on the wings of your desire to the core of everything that is” “lose your mind over the utter splendor peel off all the layers of illusion, let your soul bloom and surrender. Listen to my tune and align to me” APPLAUSE!! |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Margherita - In spite of life's crazy ways your tune of love plays so very beautifully and invitingly. Thank you for a wonderful read! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Margherita~ My dear lady ... this is just positively exquisite~ How tenderly you align the thoughts that lead us gently into the circle of your being~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you my dear Poet friends for your loving and generous comments. Have a great time, being creative! Love and Joy. Margherita  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Margerita, this is a most pure, delightful celebration of dedicated, selfless love, dearest friend, indeed I believe a lover's heart can serve as a warm refuge from a stark reality always, and truly serves as a wonderful celestial chalice as well, a gossamer chalice that tickles the lips fancifully, yay! (sigh) This is soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Margherita, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
thankyou for sharing ~ and shedding some light for my souls~ My spirit will rise |
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